https://blog.spacehey.comForum Topic created by Werellahttps://forum.spacehey.com/reply?id=840168https://forum.spacehey.com/reply?id=840168Hello, I liked the details throughout your poem! The way you described the angel was the definition of perfect imperfections. I noticed you used a lot of repetitions, if that’s your style then kudos! Personally, I think more variety in your sentence structure can enhance your details. Like: Elegant hay colored hair waved in a soft breeze  Or smth like that, I’m also pretty new in poetry too!Fri, 10 Oct 2025 05:52:05 +0000https://forum.spacehey.com/reply?id=840061https://forum.spacehey.com/reply?id=840061I like this! it leaves lots of room for imagination.Thu, 09 Oct 2025 15:10:58 +0000https://forum.spacehey.com/reply?id=839844https://forum.spacehey.com/reply?id=839844I really like the imagery in this1!! It's very immersive, especially for a first time (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶) Something I noticed is that halfway through your poem, it starts to read less like the flow-y poetry you were going for at the beginning, and more like full sentences just put onto different lines. This is fine, if that's what you were going for, but in my opinion it starts to feel less like poetry and ...Wed, 08 Oct 2025 14:45:48 +0000